My memoir experience

Like last spring when I did the crots paper I'm enjoying writing the memoirs. Last night I expanded the Tyler scene as well as reaworked it writing in past tense but actually focusing on writing action and not just exposition. I know that I need to further improve the junior year scene, but I'm having a hard time thinking of how to do that. I think I'm going to do more in my head stuff and a few more instances of how they just don't actually care. As for the conclusion I know that I want to do something with the lines of dialogue that I wrote. Last night I was considering writing a poem, but I don't want it to sound too much like the purpose. I think my overall theme is harder to pin down than a lot of the other ones in class. I'm not even sure that I get it all the time which may or may not mean I'm on the right track? I think today I need to ask how to develop the last memoir and close the paper.